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An Angelic Demon Flew by *TheChild13:iconTheChild13:



Upon this earth I have walked.
For my wings were tattered and torn.
And while I walked amongst these beings of darkness and light,
I noticed a child filled with anger and strife.
There was a regret that I knew would stir.
But I decided that I would take a chance on her.
So I took her small hand and I took her on a flight,
of blood and vengeance, and agony adore.
Yet there was something that grew in my soul,
was I falling in love with this girl?
Through the centuries I have gone,
without the romance upon my tongue,
so why should this century be any different?
Is it cause this girl is my savior?
Or perhaps she will be my demise,
maybe she knows how much I yearn for death,
or maybe she is the heaven that I once craved so young.
This girl will be my demise.
This girl will be my only love.
This girl will be my prodigy.
This girl will be my only laughter.
This girl...will be my daughter.
The devil can curse at me all he wants,
but I choose to love this child of tears and fury.
I choose to adore this child of pure shadow.
I just hope that I will rip her away from that light of God,
for she doesn't deserve to suffer under his eyes.
Only mine will she obey,
only mine will she learn to fear,
but only mine will she adore.
Yet..
she will be my demise.
For I fear her love will be my greatest fault.
But I choose to inhale her,
for she will teach me what my heart feared to encompass.
For maybe this love of hers will be my most beautiful emotion.
©2008-2009 *TheChild13
:iconthechild13:

Author's Comments

I wrote this yesterday and thought it was the best for my collaboration with ~winged1

It's his turn to make a visualization for my poetry.

I do hope he has fun with this. :)

This was spoken in front of a large group of people.
It was very deep and emotional.

This is based off of my new story (I won't be posting it here), it deals with a little girl that was taken when she was four by a man dressed as a priest. He was actually a vampire in disguise trying to find someone that he could share his knowledge with that wasn't immortal. He found a young girl in a church with her family, he sensed a dark presence about her and he became rather interested.
He could feel himself falling in love with the girl as she grew up, at first he thought he truly loved her, but in retrospect he saw her as his daughter. He became protective and obsessed with her, and once she grew older and gained a male best friend, her mentor went insane with jealousy. The love he had for her led to his demise in a sword fight with her.
So ya, that's the story behind this poem. This is when he finds her and is evaluating his feelings and thoughts towards her. An inner battle.

The way I'm writing the story is by the girls point of view. She is writing the main conversations and events that she had with her mentor and other characters.


Enjoy it.

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:iconwinged1:
mwahaha...oh how the gears turn in my head. I love its visual elements. I think I can incorporate the back story, but even taking it literally would be awesome.
ah...so much potential, I hope to grasp some of it.
gum gum gum

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"Procrastination is the parasite of a finished product." -Joey Novak
"The art of conversation is like, kind of dead and stuff." - Not my quote, I just love it regardless
:iconhaunted-nights:
Hey, I really enjoyed this! Sounds like a story I'd like to read.

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It might help if we could take ourselves less seriously
:iconsageofthesand:
aww i look forward to your next poem it was interesting

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Alvin: Yippee-Kie-Ya, Mammasita!
:iconthechild13:
I'm so glad that you liked it!! I haven't heard from you in so long. How are you? :hug:

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"Only when we've lost everything, are we free to do anything."
:iconthechild13:
I have a strong feeling that you'll be able to grasp this poems visual aspects very well. You have a very huge imagination and I know that you can do it. :D :D

*pushes a huge safe in front of you* Inside is eighty pounds of black skittles gum!!!
You get it once the collab is done. :giggle:

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"Only when we've lost everything, are we free to do anything."

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